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I miss the magic,
miss the shine
that i could, in most plain things find,
i miss the magic
miss the sparkle
when the world was paved in gold and marble,
i miss the magic
miss the glimmer
when beauty ran rampant and ev'rything shimmered,
i miss the magic
miss the fun
all the moments of splendor from when i was young,
i miss the magic
miss the music
i heard all day long in my world so lurid

i miss the magic
of the young
when the world was beautiful, life just begun
now i have the eyes of an adult
to see the world in all its tumult
the shine has faded, the sparkle has gone,
the glimmer has tarnished, the fun has moved on,
the music has stopped, and the magic has died,
all because i 'came old 'nough to open my eyes.
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HA! bet you thought it would be about mandy being in disney
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oh man, i can relate to that SO well.

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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
my fav line is
"when beauty ran rampant and ev'rything shimmered", cuz that IS how they make it seem in those little kid movies X3

but i dissagree about the last part. I mean, sure, its not as black and white (or just white) as it was when we were kids, but theres plenty of beauty (you couldnt feel about Mandy the same way you do now if you were a kid), theres still magic, theres still music, and theres definately still fun!!

but great poem, i love the words you chose for it!

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I DO have a life....


Just not on Tuesdays...
thanks :) and i know, i just wanted a pessimistic poem...i dont entirely agree with it very much, haha

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the voice of the artist is the unconscious voice of the masses.
~brandon boyd
you know i get to call you emo now, right?

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I DO have a life....


Just not on Tuesdays...
hahaha, no, i dont cut myself for attention XD

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the voice of the artist is the unconscious voice of the masses.
~brandon boyd
oooookk, i supoooooose i wont call you emo

X3

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I DO have a life....


Just not on Tuesdays...
I know how you feel! I want the sparkles back! *hugs the sparkles* =)

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:coffeecup: Caffeine is my drug. ^_^ So hand it over if you want to live!

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