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I'm not sure where I'm headed
but I know I'm moving forward,
(At least that's what I'm told)
And some goal I'm moving toward.

I may be running headlong
or I might be running late,
I only hope that I can reach it,
and maybe get there someday.
:iconwakeyjakeyeggsnbakey:

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not entirely pleased...but its alrite...

*note...original line 7 read
i only hope, unlike an asymptote

but i thought that narrated too specifically the image i was getting at

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:iconmangoe:
very interesting ballad :nod: :clap:

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Climb like a rockstar! =3
:iconcrypticshadows:
It's good. The last line is not so much a clincher. From my opinion only, I would probably change it something like (period after it) & "Maybe I'll get there someday." as a more powerful statement.. that would help keep the reader thinking after they're done reading.

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To feel a rainbow, you need to feel the rain.

And who doesn't love running around in a storm?
:iconashoreneverreached:
haha, i loved the original line 7 lol.

but really good. i can say that from the point of view of someone who loves philosophy.

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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
:iconwakeyjakeyeggsnbakey:
lol, thanks...i also toyed around with just changing the title to asymptote

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madness is the emergency exit.
:iconwakeyjakeyeggsnbakey:
hmm...u may be rite...i'll play around with it, thanks

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madness is the emergency exit.
:iconashoreneverreached:
mm, that woulda been a good one too...

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For my part I know nothing with any certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent van Gogh
:iconcrypticshadows:
=)

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To feel a rainbow, you need to feel the rain.

And who doesn't love running around in a storm?
:icondragon-kazooie:
it saddens me that i have to look up words that use use in poetry

so, why is it called descarte?

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Hey you- don't help them to bury the light.
:iconwakeyjakeyeggsnbakey:
cuz it relates to a person moving thru life, as tho they were the line on a cartesian plane, and their goals were there...asymptote so to speak, always trying to get there but never actually getting there, but then breaking away from that, and back into being a human, if u get close enough u can just reach out and take it

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madness is the emergency exit.

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